"Showing" not just "Telling"

Hi Guys, this is my first posting on my new blog. It also completes my study in Mr. Dalih’s Class named Creative Writing. Let’s Read!!! ♥

    Sight

          My favorite place is the Beach, why?? Because when I go to the beach, I can feel so free. Sometimes I like going to the beach to vent everything which I fell by screaming loudly at a shoreline. While I am standing near the wave and hearing the sound of the wave, I can see how big the world without any limitation. Stepping into the water and playing even showering there. I can also enjoy the beautiful scenery and it really makes me happy and feels comfortable. When evening comes I can see sunset, it is very beautiful. Then the sky suddenly changes the color because the sun will change with the moon. It makes me grateful and amazes the power of god.

    Smell

          I do not like the smell which comes from the death of animal. People usually call this carcass. When there is a dead animal and left at last, the animal will emit stench. When I smell it, I will feel dizzy and nauseate. The smell is very unpleasant. I am going to hold my breath while moving to the place that makes me better. It is the bad time.

    Taste

          This food is made of chopped meat and crushed with flour and egg; usually it is formed like a ball name meatball. It was very tasty especially when it is mixed with various spices. We can also feel so spicy when we add some sauce or chili and we feel sweet sensation when we add some soy sauce. Or we can feel both of them when we add them equally. It depends on you, guys.

    Hearing

          When I woke up in the morning, the first sound that I heard was my phone’s ringtone. The ringtone was I’m yours from Jason Mraz. It usually happened because my mother always calls me every morning to wake me up.

    Touch

          The pink flower jelly shoes wedges. My shoes color’s is pink. It has flower form and wedges not flat. The display of shoes looks simple but elegant with Flexural base and the surface is not slippery. The shoes are very comfortable in use. It also can be used for formal and non-formal.

          That’s all my description about something by using my five senses. And I have tried to “show” the reader not only “tell” so that the reader can feel the same like what I feel.